Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma] Choices I: Planned Brotherhood Part I
From: Robert Atendido
Date: 11/25/2005, 2:42 PM

Interesting concept.  I know I've seen this very cure put forth in other fanfics, but in a more humorous fashion.  I'll be interested to see where you go with it.  The characterizations should be interesting...

A technical note (but just my opinion):  Please, please, do not do justified plaintext.  Justified text works in a variable width font because the spaces between the words can be adjusted in fractional increments, and even the spaces between the letters if necessary.  In plaintext, with a fixed width font, double-width spaces between words just doesn't look right.  The triple-width spaces between sentences are also off-putting.

"Yes."  She chuckled.  "And since it is still a Jushenkyou curse,

Little nitpick:  Jusenkyou.  The "sen" is also the "sen" in onsen, and...gah.  I'd better get back to studying for the JLPT....

See you at Ennien,
(a.k.a. Raja, (very) occasional writer of fanfic)
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