More pointless observations, comments, and mind numblingly stupid
jokes with nothing to do with actually grammar! Aha!
Serves me right for not posting for so long. ^_^
Makes several of us on the ML.
Here it is, plus the additions and corrections.
All your for only 19.95. :p
At their greatest moment of need, like some divine spirit, came the >Heaven's Arrow. Streaking red across the skies and ripping the >ground in its passage, this falling heavenly body, then regarded as
messenger from the sky realms, could not have come at a better >time.
As if guided by a friendly hand, it smashed into the greatest
concentration of enemy troops and cut a swathe through their supply
lines like a reaper at harvest.
And the Rock and Lightning Ninja call foul on Serenity for God-modding
using an interstellar battle cruiser.
This event turned the tide of the war and, more importantly, changed the fate of the world."
Yes! Water now swirls counter-clockwise!
was still here. As it was, some
of the more prominent clans had, earlier that night, politely >suggested an ANBU team sent out to check on the young ninja's >progress. She had diplomatically told them that they were all idiots >and were acting like old hens.
And she was using no fewer than half a dozen four letter words to
express herself. :p
She sighed and turned away from the sight. Enough of this.
Still more paperwork to do and not even probably the world's >end would save her from it.
The Apocolypse has nothing on taxes and the paperwork with it. Proven fact.
of the latest developments in the world. His mention of 'friends' made the young boy curious but he left
it alone and just voiced his thoughts about the peculiar lunar phenomenon.
And no skirt chasing? Who is this guy? Where's the Bill Clinton ninja, I ask!
"Just gives me the creeps. The guys after me _are_ named 'red >moon', after all."
The white-haired hermit snorted.
"The Akatsuki's powerful, yes, but not _that_ powerful. They're >not some monster from the old tales like Gojira or the Beryl Queen. >They're just bugfuck crazy shinobi with delusions of grandeur."
Bwa ha ha! I wonder what exactly is written in the tales of Gojira
and Beryl. Rubber monster suit fan's dream come true. :)
The thought of showing Sasuke how creative he was the next >time they met made his mouth stretch into a predatory grin, though >his heart still ached at his rival/friend's betrayal.
Oh... my goodness. You should have seen some of the things a few fans
did when they showed that episode. It was not pretty. -_-
Still, times like these, he was feeling a bit homesick.
Ichiraku's ramen would have sure hit the spot better than trail >food and he would have appreciated a bit more company than just >Jiraiya. Before leaving Konoha a year ago, he had managed to gather >a rather impressive circle of friends. Well, impressive for someone >who didn't actually have any before Ninja Academy graduation.
It's the natural progression in shounen stories like this. But
anyway, I also seem to recall Naruto hanging out with Kiba, Shika, and
Chouji quite a bit before graduating. Almost gave Iruka a heart
attack once, IIRC.
Making no sudden movements, Naruto's hand crept to his >kunai holster, waiting a signal from Jiraiya to move.
Aww, no more 'do something stupid to completely surprise us' Naruto
antics? I'm heartbroken, Elsa. Heartbroken I tell ya.
Making seal with one handed, Jiraiya sent out his chakra in the >manner that he did when he was doing his 'research',
Heh. That's the Jiraiya I know. :)
"A fellow wanderer of the world, seeking a little company on the >road of life."
Jiraiya perked up at that.
...I thought it and I know it's wrong, but I thought it! Arg!!
The phrase would have been a little flowery and eccentric, but no
one would have noticed the code hidden in it, except if they knew >what they were looking for. One of the Order was here? It would have >explained why the man had approached him and Naruto. The
Toad Sannin may not have been a full member, but he was >technically an honorary one after that little adventure with the geisha >in the Earth Country daimyo's court a few years ago.
A tale that he probably used in one of his stories, I'll bet. :p
Just the continous run of prosperity and peace that made the right >sort of men rich.
Of course.
Which is why they hated the Akatsuki and their rather >disruptive actions with a vengeance, though there seemed to be >another reason why the Order of the Crescent seemed to be wanting >to take the missing nins down.
And they'll do it in ridiculous looking sailor suits!
Pushing away his suspicions for thge moment, Jiraiya >responded with the second half of the recognition code while giving >Naruto the stand-down signal. The enemy of your enemy is, at the >very least, not going to kill you today, after all.
*thinks of that psycho Shira from Blade of the Immortal*
man's brown hair was tied in a short ponytail and he was wearing a >black tradesman's gi and hakama.
Oh! It's a Death God from Bleach making a cameo! :D (j/k)
<Major snip>
"Hojo's the name. Kamiya Hojo, travelling medicine man, at >your service!"
Hojo: I'll be your narrator for the story from here on out. So be
sure to have all your plot points in their convuluted positions. :p
sentry. Experience always beat out youth, after all.
That's not always the case, but it's quite often, I've found.
Thus, this small piece of the night, silent and sleek, moved >with feline grace as it entered the Hidden Village of the Leaf.
And thus, it begins...
The inclusion of Tsunade, Naruto, and Jiraiya makes me happy. Though
I can't help but feel just a bit worried for Sakura as what I think
what will happen comes in the following chapters. Here's hoping
inspiration for more chapters hit soon... *crosses fingers for Hinata
to appear*
-Warhammer