Steven Scott wrote:
"Yeh, eru'oy ekawa!" he said, but Sakura didn't understand him.
It sounded like English, and she didn't know much of that. He stepped
into the room, and said something else. "Driew emutsoc. Era uoy a
Repus?"
It wasn't until the end of the chapter that I figured out you were just
spelling things backwards. I understand that you want to represent
foreignness, but that's hardly the way to go about it, because what Dash
is saying here _doesn't_ sound like English. Try instead spelling it out
phonetically... "Hay, uuure awek!" or some such. That will present some
foreignness, without being just plain weird.
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