Michael A Chase wrote:
Suggested changes: {before : after}
On 05/08/2005 08:29 AM, Thunderstruck said:
Ukyou's good hand opened and closed {spastically : spasticly :
spasmotically}. "If... is there some kind of weapon we could give
him? Anything?"
Correction: the spelling "spastically" is correct ("spasticly" is not
correct), and the other suggested alternate word is spelled
"spasmodically", with no T.
As soon as I have any spare time, I plan to start rereading this fic
from the beginning... expect commentary on each chapter as I get to it,
if I find anything which needs correction or which inspires some
particular comment.