Subject: [FFML] [C&C][fanfic][Ranma] Relentless - Chapter 18
From: Michael A Chase
Date: 5/8/2005, 11:21 PM
To: thunderstruck_comic@comcast.net
CC: FFML <ffml@anifics.com>


Suggested changes: {before : after}

On 05/08/2005 08:29 AM, Thunderstruck said:

The two opposing streams hung in the balance for several long moments
- the Reikoku pumping out countless hideous worms, {Ramma : Ranma}
blasting into the oncoming horde with an ever- growing column of
gyrating wind. Finally, the tide of repulsive flesh began to ebb,
diminishing under the rending onslaught of the Hundred-Headed Dragon.
The Reikoku pulled its robes back over the dark portal from which it
had drawn the hungering worm-arms, and began to advance again.

Ukyou's good hand opened and closed {spastically : spasticly :
spasmotically}. "If... is there some kind of weapon we could give
him? Anything?"

Quite another fight scene.

It's been a long, strange trip, with many obstacles and {Delays :
delays}, but we've finally made it. My profound thanks to all who
have supported me in writing this story. Special thanks to Gary
Kleppe, who has been the most consistent source of helpful C&C. Also
my gratitude to all the fans who have written with your questions,
comments, help, and demands to know when the chapter was going to be
done.

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