I nearly fell out my chair when I read Kuno's Holy Grail reference! 
But I think anyone familiar with Monty Python would have gotten it without
Konatsu's reply.
 
~
Konatsu let out a little bark of laughter. "Your imprecise 
command of zoology is going to cost you this time, Black 
Rose!" he vaunted. "Monkey Repellant is no use against Miss 
Sanae... she is an ape!"
"Curses," Kodachi snarled villainously.
~
I about died here. ^_^
 
~
Ranma looked, and there was Akane. Her face was a bit flushed 
from the liquor she'd drunk earlier, and her smile was shy. 
Kitty-cat ears stuck up from Akane's hair, a cat tail swished 
from the rear of her outfit. Dark stripes adorned the 
skintight yellow catsuit she wore. Her mittens and shoes were 
shaped in the fashion of soft white paws. 
~
I half expected Ranma to suddenly manifest a rigid, upright tail 
with a 'Boing!' sound effect.  
 
It was nice that Shampoo could help Ranma overcome his ailurophobia 
without resorting to the fic-friendly gradual accustoming to her 
cursed form.
 
Its a pity that the humorous threads have pretty much been resolved. 
Considering how dark this story has sometimes been, its amazing that 
you've maintained such a genuinely comedic ambience in all the dealings in 
Nerima. Its never felt inappropriate or forced. 
 
Onto the nitty gritty, now? 
 
Wonderful chapter. 
 
 

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