Okay, there's one comment I need to make here, that I should have made in
earlier C&C, but neglected to do so. But I'm seeing it more and more in
recent fics, and it is really getting on my nerves.

It's AZUSA, not ASUZA. Shiratori AZUSA.

Asuza is a different name entirely--usually a male name, at that.

Also:

So she gave me these packets of Instant

Nanniichuan Spring water to try."

Since Konatsu is already a man, Nanniichuan would do nothing to him. If it
was Instant NYANNIICHUAN, on the other hand...

Okay, that bit of rantage aside...

Great chapter. Especially the cat training stuff. Hilarious! =D

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