Subject: [FFML] [C&C][fanfic][Ranma] Relentless - Chapter 14
From: Michael A Chase
Date: 4/14/2005, 12:38 AM
To: thunderstruck_comic@comcast.net
CC: FFML <ffml@anifics.com>


Suggested changes: {before : after}

On 04/10/2005 09:01 AM, Thunderstruck said:

"It's perfect!" Mousse exclaimed, holding aloft the flip-book 
in triumph.  "Nothing can possibly go wrong!"

I think I may have heard that somewhere before.  Usually just before
everything collapses.

"Out of the question, {dear : Dear}," Cologne said primly.  

The Amazon matriarch made a little humming noise.  "Be that as 
it may, sometimes it is for the best.  Ranma was right to 
leave you behind when he fled the Reikoku, {girl : Girl}.  You were in 
no shape to make such a journey."  She thumped Mousse's 
unconscious form with her staff.  "Nor is he.  His skills may 
be..." she ground her teeth, "... somewhat better than 
mediocre, I'll grant, but he would still only be in your way."

"Will do," she promised. "Thanks, {sis : Sis}. For being the one who's 
keeping everyone in touch like this."

There was a festival coming up soon, she remembered. Maybe she 
could drag the pretty ninja along for a little R&R. She liked 
dressing up and going out for that kind of thing...

With someone prettier than herself?

"Is that so?" replied the mercenary girl. "Say, {sis : Sis}. I have a 
notion about how something I'd like Miss Sanae's help with..."

Ryouga barked out a laugh.  "Ha!  We know better than that.  
You survived for ten years in a cave, miles away from the 
nearest woman.  It'll take more than a few stinky socks to 
kill you.  I think you're too evil to die, {old man : Old Man}."

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