and from Michael A Chase:

Suggested changes: {before : after}

and used them, as always

Sorry for the long delay.  I've been working through the back issues of
some other stories and just got around to new reading again.

No problem. I take forever to do mine as well

Likewise, the men's reputation as members of one of the most violent
local street gangs meant no one would tell them to keep it down. The
men might meet the request halfway by ripping the person's ear off so
they wouldn't have to hear the racket.

What could be more fair? :}b

It's meeting the person halfway.

Chiyoko waited until they were out of sight before calling the police
and informing them that a super villain had just looted her
furniture store. Immediately afterwards, she called Akemi Shutaro at
Channel 6. Her fifteen minutes of fame had come, and she was going to
milk it for all it was worth.

Smart to keep silent until they were gone.

Nothing to gain and everything to lose.

Manabu laughed. "What the hell are you supposed to do with that?
Croquet us to death?" The others joined in the laughter.

Well, you already said they weren't very bright.

Yep.

It was a light push, intended only to move the girl back down in her
seat. However, in a display of complete lack of coordination, the
girl collapsed against the chair, hitting her back against it before
landing hard on the floor.

Good way of showing to any who've forgotten that this isn't the usual
Akane Tendo.

And sets up everyone turning on Ukyou. Most people are going to 
automatically Ranma is in the right, for a change.

"Come down and play," the guys in the room said, beatific expressions
on all of their faces. As one they turned away from the window and
headed toward the door. Within seconds the room was devoid of
anything containing a Y chromosome.

It made quite a mess when the goldfish in the classroom tank started
flopping out the door.

Heh

to home in on her position. While she hoped she could take out the
bimbo without any help, she wasn't taking any chances. Better to have
too much firepower on a false alarm, like their confrontation with
Leap Frog (whose sole power was bouncing around on a pair of springs
in his frog costume), than too little on a world-beater of the
Mandarin's level.

It would be humorous if Ukyou and Akane bump into each other trying to
find someplace to change.

Not this time. Yuka and Sayuri are hanging around Akane

The Hulk was too busy fighting Spragg, the Living Hill --a member of
an alien race whose forms were identical large mounds of dirt--
preventing the large knoll from spearheading an invasion of Earth. He
had no time to answer a second call to battle.

I guess he wasn't smart enough to send the alarm for his little problem.

Hulkie? Heck no. Don't count on him ever using his card. He prefers to take 
care of matters on his own.

Hawkeye gulped. She really hadn't planned on fending off all of them.
Lighting fast she started releasing her arrows. Flare, glue, sonic,
bolo, and a variety of other non-lethal types spread into the midst
of the angry mob. Hawkeye was delighted to see Ranma was among those
blinded by the first flare arrow. He was left covering his eyes and
flailing blindly about until his vision returned.

A shame there's no cold water in the barrage.

I considered it, but I think things worked out fine as is.

Now there was a space around the figure and Urd got her first look at
him. He wore a loose red robe with voluminous sleeves and a demon's
mask with two tiny horns at the brow over his face. A pair of
overlapping letter 'D's were on his chest. Currently his hands were
tucked into his sleeves, making it appear as though he had only one
semi-circular arm.

Now comes the puzzle why DareDevil isn't enchanted.  Does Urd have to
summon each group separately?

It's vision based. It wouldn't work in a pitch black room either.

Thanks for the help. As always, much appreciated

DB Sommer 



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