Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma] Avenging Act 2 Chapter 2 Prologue
From: "DB Sommer" <sommert@connecttime.net>
Date: 3/18/2005, 12:55 AM
To: "hkmiller" <hkmiller@theeddy.com>
CC: <ffml@anifics.com>, <jimbader@yahoogroups.com>



hkmiller wrote:


Still trying to find the time to C&C Sex 7, but in the meantime, I have
enough time for
this shorty.

I look forward to the former as I comment on the latter.


DB Sommer wrote:

effect in times past. Wielding a sharp knife tended to make people see
things your way, especially when it came to economic redistribution.
Kobashi was very much in favor of that, and cutting out the government
as a middleman in the process.


Two toughs see something down an alley.  Kind of old, but sometimes you
just can't
improve on a classic.

It serves the purpose I desire, and there's only so many ways you can run 
these things.


As they drew close enough to make out the figure, both men came to an
abrupt stop. It was a woman, by far the most attractive they had ever
seen. Her skin was dark, as though she had a perpetual tan, and a
cascade of platinum locks flowed luxuriously down her back. She had an
upside down triangle tattoo in the center of her forehead,

and two marks at the points of her cheekbones

Will mention those


though the
odd mark did nothing to detract from her looks. She wore a tight green
and black body hugging, off-the-shoulder outfit. The cut was low at the
top, showing off a scandalous amount of bosom, and high at the hem,
showing off her long, black stocking clad legs. Tall thigh high green
boots completed the ensemble.


Sounds like an Enchantress outfit, the colors at least, but I haven't
the faintest idea
what the actual outfit from appearance number one looked like.  And
didn't she bring
the Executioner with her, even on her first appearance?

Outfit one was a lot more reserved than this. I am updating the garb. And 
funny you should mention the Executioner...



The woman was such a beauty she stopped both men in their tracks. Each
of them felt an animalistic urge deep in their souls as they stared at
her. It took them several seconds to recover their wits.


Yep, sounds like Enchantee

Indeed


The woman spoke in a throaty purr. �I see thou hast impeccable taste
when it comes to beauty. However, there is but one of myself and two of
thee. Perhaps it would behoove thee to discuss amongst thyselves who is
the more worthy of my attentions.�


Sufficiently good faux-Shakespearean

It's native Asgardian, which only bares a very basic resembance to 
Shakespere


So Urd's here to bother Akane, presumably to seduce her (at least until
Urd learns Thor's
current gender).  A good start; looking forward to more!

It's coming along. I think I'm halfway done. I still have all the action 
scenes left, though. Not sure how long it will take to do those. We'll see.

Thanks for the help. It's appreciated.

DB Sommer 



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