Whoah!  That's all I can say, really.  I was a bit
overwhelmed by the number of responses I got.  All I
can say was thanks a lot!  

A few things I'll make clear...

The teaser was just something I wrote up
spontaneously.  It's not the beginning of the fanfic
itself actually; but I will incorporate it (a heavily
edited and expanded version I might add) into the flow
of the storyline.  

As soon as I finished it, I sent it off to the FFML
without any revisions.  But now that I look at it, I
cringe in terror at it's sheer...roughness.  Ouch!  I
find myself wondering, "Did I really write that?"  

Thanks to all those who took the time and criticized
it line by line.  I'm really trying to improve my
writing skills so your criticism helps me alot by
spotting my obvious and subtle mistakes :-).  I will
keep your suggestions and criticism in mind when I
reintroduce that particular fighting scene in a normal
chapter approach.  

Thanks to all those who gave me positive feedback,
that has encouraged me to start writing the prologue. 
It's almost done by the way, and is under intense
scrutiny at the moment.  I'll release it, oh, maybe in
about three or four days.  

Cya then,

Dave Wong




		
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