Well, that's that. Hopefully you enjoyed.

DB Sommer

Hmm.  It's rare that a story nowadays makes me crawl out of the woodwork and
comment on it.  While it'd take too long to do a line-by-liner, I just thought
I'd note how much I enjoyed this one.

You kept the characters in character very well, and I could picture each of them
reacting how they did.  I just finished watching the entire series--great
nostalgic fluff for me, especially since I just kind of graduated from my
Bachelor's degree (going on to a Masters. Joy. -_-).

I don't particularly like omnipotent beings that just dodge in and manipulate
things to suit their whims, especially when beloved characters are involved. 
(Now, an omnipotent being that just jumps in and starts blowing things up--that
I can respect.)  And that's why I'm glad that guy got beaten in the end.  You
did a good job with Yukari coming in and defeating him with sheer incompetence
with a very simple game.

So, basically, this is a quick "thanks for writing."  It was cool! :)

--
Benjamin A Oliver
boliver@email.arizona.edu

Management Information Systems Senior Undergraduate
University of Arizona

Writings: Fan Fiction
http://rakhal.com/florestica/ben-oliver/index.html

Webcomic: Nuke 'Em 'Till They Glow!! The Early Years
http://nettg.simud.org


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