Nice little shortfic. Is this preliminary to some longer work? You've
put some thought
into who these characters are; it would be a shame not to make use of
that in a real
But, well, if I were totally honest, I'd have to say that Linna-that's
Linna Yamazaki-is my, I dunno, best (?) friend. Linna and I are around the same
age, we've gone through a lot of the same things, so we have a lot of
commonality to bond us even without this thing we do, but we're also different enough
that it's not like talking to a copy of me.
A fairly orthodox Priss, but Priss almost has to be this way, since we
better than the others from the series. Linna as best friend strikes me
as true, too.
My father was called Katsuhiko Stingray. This was not the name he was
born with. I do not know what that was.
Intriguing point; a good starter into a longer fic.
Our minds were made better. Our nervous systems made faster. Our bodies
better. Information is absorbed and processed faster. Everything faster.
Everything better. Everything stranger. Optimized humans.
"He could make us better than before. Better, faster, stronger." Cut
to kaleidoscopic scenes
of Sylia running through a desert at 60 mph, see infrared in complete
darkness, lifting one end
of a car with one hand. :)
The television not only fed my sickness, it also gave me dance. I saw my
first Hikaru Hiyama movie one day, one of her earliest works, "Downtown
Now I dance only in the street.
Might want to expand on this: ", asserting my own existence with with
which cuts off a boomer's arm, every whirl that cuts off a boomer's
head." Linna having
a self-image primarily as a dancer has always struck me as one of the
They call her Nene Romanova, the purple clad guardian of freedom and
defender of justice! Who, along with her daily life as a heroic A.D. Police
officer, protects the citizens of Megatokyo from crime and fear!
Nene is Minako? (blinks) Or Natsumi Tsujimoto?
Seriously, this struck me as a bit OOC, though I'm not sure why; this
just isn't how
I see Nene.
Have you heard how your older sister went to a third world nation and made it a paradise on Earth all by herself?
Another interesting premise for further stories.
(Come to think of it, I guess I have more in common with my uncle than
anything. He was a cop too and according to all the old family stories, a bit
of rebel. There have been cops before in our family, but none like him. I
really would have liked to have met him more times than I did.)
And who was this? Goto? For that matter, who were Linna's parents?
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