On Thu, 6 Nov 2003, PainAmplifier wrote:

At 11:02 PM 11/5/2003 -0500, you wrote:

This is a short story.  I know, hard to believe I wrote an actual short
story, but it is, really.  It also eventually turns R-rated, so be
forewarned.

Displaced
An Utena Fanfic

By John Biles

Very nice.  I didn't see any obvious technical errors, and I thought the
story progressed rather smoothly.  The setup at the dance felt a bit long
until the all the expositions fell into place around Juri and Miki.  A nice

Probably influenced by how much I love Wakaba.  Give the girl more screen
time :)

WAFFy little character driven piece that I feel follows the theme and
characters of the show very well.  I enjoy seeing fics which leave
Ranma/DBZ/SM behind as much as I like the fics which include them. So this
one was very welcome.

Good enough work to drag me out of the black hole of Lurkerdom at
least.  And I don't post often.   |#_#l"

Glad you enjoyed it.  It's my first Utena story.  But not my last, I
think.


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