Yeah, it's kind of hard to take something like this apart and come 
up with something to say. :/

    Thanks for the feedback!

    I hope to some day win an award for "Best 
Shinobu-is-an-Incarnation-of-Death in a Love Hina Fanfic" or something.

DB Sommer wrote:

Nicely done. Good mood and imagery, and very surreal, as you said. I liked
it. Can't say much else. Didn't see any grammar mistakes. and something like
this, not much you can say about characterization and plot. It flowed nicely
as well.

DB Sommer
 

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