Subject: [FFML] Re: [Love Hina][Surreal] The Elysium Fields |
From: Brian Randall |
Date: 9/27/2003, 1:12 AM |
To: DB Sommer |
CC: Innocent Bystanders <ffml@anifics.com> |
Yeah, it's kind of hard to take something like this apart and come up with something to say. :/ Thanks for the feedback! I hope to some day win an award for "Best Shinobu-is-an-Incarnation-of-Death in a Love Hina Fanfic" or something. DB Sommer wrote:
Nicely done. Good mood and imagery, and very surreal, as you said. I liked it. Can't say much else. Didn't see any grammar mistakes. and something like this, not much you can say about characterization and plot. It flowed nicely as well. DB Sommer
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