Subject: [FFML] [C&C][Fanfic][Karekano] But I Stood In The Background Chapter 6
From: Michael A Chase
Date: 9/20/2003, 10:12 PM
To: Cheshire Grin , ffml@anifics.com


Suggested changes: {before : after}

On Fri, 19 Sep 2003 07:37:24 +1000 Cheshire Grin
<cheshiregrin@iprimus.com.au> wrote:

That was why we were here anyway. In about an hour, Arima would meet
up with the Kendo club at the train station and head off for the
National competitions in Tokyo. There to spend the better part of
the holidays working up a sweat hitting other guys with sticks. I
just love kendo.

I think he was in Nagato, not Tokyo.

"Why are you asking me?" I {questioned : asked}.

"Hi, I'm Tsubaki Sakura and this pervert is Asaba but you needn't
worry about him." Sakura continued, giving me a slap on the back that
sent me reeling and crumpled my perfect style like a sledgehammer on
a meat-bun.

But they do need to worry about her.

She refused to tempted. What a pity. Still if Miyazawa unbuttoned her
shirt and Arima ever heard about it..

Can you spell 'death', I knew you could.  I thought this part was Maho
until about this point.  There may be a missing '* * *'.

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