Dark.  Great concept.  I like it.  The explanation as
to why all the kids/pilots are screwed up is so good,
makes me wonder why nobody has used it before!  Good
job.  Would like to see a longer fic out of this with
more build up...maybe a repitition of one of the kids
getting killed several times in a row and slowly
figuring it out and DOING something about it...sorta
like in one of Douglas Adams HHGTTG books where the
guys slowly figures out he is being killed by Arthur
Dent everytime he is reincarnated....

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