Subject: [FFML] Re: [WWW][Ranma] The Clan and Original Fiction
From: Benjamin Goldberg
Date: 4/3/2003, 5:33 PM
To: ffml@anifics.com


"C. Jones" wrote:

At 08:02 PM 4/2/2003 -0800, K'thardin wrote:
[snip]
 >Even with this last chapter, the focus in the melee
 >combat was only upon Ranma...token notices being given to Ryouga,
Ukyou, etc...

As was I intended it. Despite their strengths, the others are
ineffective against the raveners.

Well, show that then! :)

Just because Ukyo, Ryoga, etc, aren't winning their fights, doesn't mean
that we the readers don't want to see those fights.

Also, I would expect at least one of them to get injured -- cracked
ribs, perhaps.  Just having the person show up in the next scene, with
an injury, without any details of how it was gotten, gives a feeling
that something's been left out.  And, having everyone show up in the
next scene utterly unscathed feels even worse.

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