Subject: [FFML] Re: [fusion][R1/2/Avengers] Avenging Chapter 11 Part A
From: allynyonge0000@netscape.net (allyn yonge)
Date: 9/30/2002, 12:13 PM
To: sommer@3rdm.net ("DB Sommer")
CC: ffml@anifics.com


It's not so much that I stop half-way through when C&Cing, as I can only read so far before my brain starts to melt. Sturgen's Law is in full effect.

I sympathize with the 'large cast'. One of the reasons I wrote "Lure the Tiger" was to see if i could handle a large number of characters interacting in a story. I found that i had to keep going back through the story and delete dialogue and replace with narrative. Otherwise i had large chunks of naked dialogue sort of suspended in space.

You're much more familiar with "Marvel" than I am, so i can't comment on different writers/artists for "Hulk" (or any other character). But if Marvel had written "Hulk" the way you do, I might actually have bought some of their magazines.

I'm afraid my taste in 'comics' is more toward "Little Orphan Annie" or "The Phantom" or "Flash Gordon" ^_*

I liked your "Daredevil" MUCH more than "Captain Japan" and your Mousse better than Ranma. I thought there was more depth of characterization with Mousse.

And Hawkeye was simply wonderful fun. ^_* Electra reminded me of a pulp hero. Very well done 'death' scene, btw. And a nicely handled "love triangle".

Akane/Thor: Part of the problem is that I know a bit about Norse mythology and customs and I ALWAYS hated (HATED!!!) what Marvel did with it. :(
So, ANYTHING would be "too close".
Probably a similar problem with Ranma/Cpt. Japan.

The most important thing it that your story is a GOOD READ! It's fun and kept my attention.






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