"L.S McGill" <lsmcgill@hotmail.com> wrote:

As he leered, a young girl wearing a tiger
stripped bikini flew out of the gate.

I think you meant "striped", here. ^_^;

    You've been sleeping since then.  The Sysop said
you'd blown most of your energy on the transmittal, since it was an
unscheduled wish.  

You might want to say "acting sysop" or "Peorth" (since Peorth seems
to run the show in Urd and Skuld's absence in both the manga and
movie). Urd is Yggdrasil's sysop, and Skuld is debugger.

Father was a trifle upset at that, but he said he's

I'm only going to mention that even though he may be their father and
even though both Animeigo and now Dark Horse have translated
"Kami-sama" as "Father", the goddess sisters never call him that.

Brian Welch



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