Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma][fic] Shampoo's Chance Prolouge
From: "H. Torrance Griffin" <htgriffin@yahoo.com>
Date: 8/25/2002, 6:11 AM
To: caleb_david@angelfire.com, ffml@anifics.com


_Very_ interesting idea (although the general framework of the most honorable
'out' for Shampoo has always struck me as obvious), and good setup regarding
the hallucinations/visions/family visitation.  Only two points to make (aside
from the usual spelling/grammar goofs in a first draft).

--- Caleb <caleb_david@angelfire.com> wrote:
      "Your a powerful Amazon, Xian Pu."  The intruders Mandarin was 
like cold steel,

First, I think it has been confirmed that her name (according to the best
transliterations) is Shan Pu.  Second, I doubt the Joketsuzoku are closly akin
to Han Chinese or speak Mandarin among themselves much (Qinghai provence is a
sparsely populated place wedged between Tibet and East Turkistan, and
incidentally too far west to have much first-hand experience with the tender
mercies of the IJA).

HTG

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