A grammar mistake from Gary?  Never thought I would see that.

"Your mother was in a hurry to have grandchildren,
because it doesn't look like it will be possible for
her and I to have any more children."

for she and I to
(unless this is Genma's mistake)

Actually, it should be 'her and me'.  The phrase is the object of the preposition 'for'; object pronouns are needed.  'She' and 'I' are both subject pronouns.

Personally, I would either leave it as is (while technically incorrect, it's probably what most people would say) or change it to 'for us'.

Nice story, btw.  When can we expect to see some more of your other fics?

Defender of the Light
Elite Mage
junior member of the Inner Circle of the Mages Council

Contrary to popular opinion, magic and science do mix.

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