Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C][Fanfic][SM][Alt][1st draft]Different, But Still The Same-Chapter 2
From: Kyhdin@aol.com
Date: 8/15/2002, 5:30 AM
To: mchase@ix.netcom.com, ffml@anifics.com


In a message dated 8/14/02 1:16:38 PM, mchase@ix.netcom.com writes:

Suggested changes: {before : after}

On Wed, 14 Aug 2002 03:06:44 EDT Kyhdin@aol.com wrote:

Whew! And moving right along...

And this is supposed to be a good thing in what way?  I have to admire
your persistance dodging the air strikes though. :}b

I use the skills I've been given.

Amy Lynn rose with the sun and went to bed at around ten at night. It
was, she had concluded some time ago, the most efficient use of her time.
She did not waste time laying in bed, but rather immediately gathered her 
things
and marched down the hall to the tub, which she filled with water heated
to a comfortably warm sixty-five degrees.

I'm trying to figure out where she got water that cold in Juuban Hollow
in the summer.  I agree that she'd find it comfortable.

Better explantion in the next draft...

Being the daughter of a Dark Kingdom general would explain some of her
more unusual abilities.

It would, wouldn't it?

"You're fooling yourself," Jeddadiah said. "Once we find Empreya, the
Queen will slaughter her and the rest of the humans like pigs. You really 
think
you can save her?"

"Shut up, Jeddite," Malachite snarled.

Does that mean he's not gay?  Maybe if Amy Lynn's mother realizes he's
just a major leader in an organization dedicated to destroying all human life
on earth, she'll be willing to talk to him.

Oh no, he's gay. Old feelings, however, die hard.

And fatherhood is for life...

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