You wrote:

Should I continue this?

No!

Actually, perhaps I should read it first. :)

    "You can help us a great deal, because you think quickly."

    "That's for sure", replied Misato, pulling her pistol out.  The two

agents

tried to get out their own guns and shoot at her, but they had no chance,

not

wearing sunglasses as dark as that in lighting conditions as poor as in

that

room.  She let loose two shots at each agent, aiming for their unprotected
heads.  They collapsed to the floor, the pools of blood nearly invisible

in

the darkness.

Hmm. Interesting.

    Misato ran along the corridors.  Turning a corner, she slammed

straight

into someone.  What rotten luck...  she had to get away.

    A split second later, she realized it was Ayanami Rei.  And Rei was

staring

at her gun.  In her panic, she hadn't holstered it.

    "Hello" said Misato, quickly holstering the gun.

    Rei looked at her.  "You shot someone."  She said that in that

strange,

just-an-observation, tone that she often used.

Well, yes.

    "Come with me", said Misato.  She didn't exactly want Rei telling

anyone,

and she couldn't bear to shoot the girl, nor was there time to tie her up.
Soon everyone would know what she did anyway, just from the security

cameras.

Good point.

    Misato pushed the door open, her eyes focusing on the agent inside,

and

her nose reacting to the tang of blood...  the blood from Kaji's steaming
corpse, which the agent was standing over.  "What a fool I am..." she

muttered.

Too late.

Oops. Thought she'd be there in time.

    "I know", said Rei.  She kneeled to the dead agent and picked

something

up.

    In horror, Misato lifted her own gun, hoping she could kill Rei before

Rei

could kill her with the gun from the dead agent.  Misato didn't make it.

Rei

fired, her face expressionless, her aim deadly...  but she didn't fire at
Misato.  There was another agent in the room.  But not any more; now there

was

another corpse.

Behind Misato, perhaps. Can't see how another one could be in the room and
not reacted until then.

    "Rei, you..."

    "I told you, I know.  I am to be part of Third Impact."

    "Do you want to be?"

    "I don't know."

Good answer.

    "No."

    "Then let's get out of here, Rei.  I hear the guards coming already."

(Definitely not the end.)

could be very interesting thing to continue. Hope to see more later.

D.B. Sommer

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