Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Tue, 23 Jul 2002 10:55:13 -0400 Django Wexler <dwexler@andrew.cmu.edu>
wrote:
Kyn was happy, at least, dashing from wreck to wreck ahead of us
looking for something to eat or play with. This state of boundless
curiosity occupied most of her waking hours, but watching her amused me
enough to keep my mind off what had happened here as we closed in on the
Hikawa shrine, where I'd last felt the presence of another Senshi.
I can see why Kyn is a good companion for Ami. She makes a good
counterweight for Ami's over-serious nature.
"Oneesama." Kyn squeezed my hand a bit tighter. "I don't think I
like this place."
Amazing, she's showing a little sense. I guess that's another useful
characteristic for Ami. If Kyn is nervous, Ami knows she _really_ needs to
be careful.
The last time I looked, the MS Word document in your web page was up
through chapter 21. It is getting rather large. If feasable, it might be
useful to break it at the Part boundaries. Some notice when it's updated
might also save some bandwidth by not having to download 500K to see if
anything has changed.