Hiya!
Sorry for the delay in replying--internet access continues to be
intermittent (and dies completely in less than a week.) My reply won't be
as thorough as I'd like, but thanks for taking the time to give some
feedback--I really appreciate it.
When she looked up, there was nobody there. Only then did she
realize how much she had hoped to find Ranma--expected to find him,
even; and she released a breath unconsciously kept trapped until that
moment.
Aw, I hoped she'd find him there too. :(
<grin> You know, I was wondering whether the whole Ranma-under-the-bridge
thing was a fanfiction convention. I mean, do we see it all that often in
the manga? Or even in the anime? Not that I don't mind using it myself,
but I was just curious as to where it started...
in gently drifting shafts. The level of the canal was quickly
rescinding, and a few ducks even fluttered by, dipping their heads
beneath the surface.
What happened to letting Ranma tell people. I think Akane should at
least have a little hesitation or conflict at up and spilling to her
sister just after she had decided to keep mum.
Well, I was thinking that, while she'd decided not to tell anyone else, she
kind of had to tell Nabiki, since her sister was already in the know... but
I'll see if I can tweak it a bit.
Thanks for giving us something to read before you leave!
My pleasure, and thanks for the C&C. It's especially well received since
it's one of the only feedback I've received. And sorry I didn't comment
much on what you adviced--I'll be thinking it over and probably implementing
a bunch of it, once I get settled down again.
Anyway, thanks again, and I hope you find my comments slightly
helpful!
I always do! I'm hoping to have the rest of the chapter done by the end of
October.
Later,
Mike Noakes
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