Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma] Choices: Decision (incomplete draft)
From: "Michael Noakes" <noakes_m@hotmail.com>
Date: 7/15/2002, 8:03 PM
To: minty@clockworkgirl.com
CC: ffml@anifics.com


Hiya!

Sorry for the delay in replying--internet access continues to be 
intermittent (and dies completely in less than a week.)  My reply won't be 
as thorough as I'd like, but thanks for taking the time to give some 
feedback--I really appreciate it.

	When she looked up, there was nobody there.  Only then did she
realize how much she had hoped to find Ranma--expected to find him,
even; and she released a breath unconsciously kept trapped until that
moment.
Aw, I hoped she'd find him there too. :(

<grin>  You know, I was wondering whether the whole Ranma-under-the-bridge 
thing was a fanfiction convention.  I mean, do we see it all that often in 
the manga?  Or even in the anime?  Not that I don't mind using it myself, 
but I was just curious as to where it started...

in gently drifting shafts.  The level of the canal was quickly
rescinding, and a few ducks even fluttered by, dipping their heads
beneath the surface.

What happened to letting Ranma tell people. I think Akane should at
least have a little hesitation or conflict at up and spilling to her
sister just after she had decided to keep mum.

Well, I was thinking that, while she'd decided not to tell anyone else, she 
kind of had to tell Nabiki, since her sister was already in the know... but 
I'll see if I can tweak it a bit.

Thanks for giving us something to read before you leave!

My pleasure, and thanks for the C&C.  It's especially well received since 
it's one of the only feedback I've received.  And sorry I didn't comment 
much on what you adviced--I'll be thinking it over and probably implementing 
a bunch of it, once I get settled down again.

Anyway, thanks again, and I hope you find my comments slightly
helpful!

I always do!  I'm hoping to have the rest of the chapter done by the end of 
October.

Later,
Mike Noakes

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