Subject: [FFML] [C&C][Fanfict][R.5/SM]Awkward Consequences Prologue - 6
From: "Sam Vilsmeier" <syp104@email.psu.edu>
Date: 6/15/2002, 12:26 AM
To: "Michael A Chase" <mchase@ix.netcom.com>
CC: "FFML \(E-mail\)" <ffml@anifics.com>
Reply-to:
"Sam Vilsmeier"



To make it easyer on the ML, I combined my reply into one message. Sorry
about the late reply, but Real Life and a bad case of Arcanum addiction has
been keeping me away from the net... ^_^;

I'm snipping out the basic grammar corrections, and focusing on the imput.

Life or Death. Dishonor or Conspiracy. Duplicity or Truth. What would
the
others say? What would they do? What would they think? What would they
ask
of her? The choice, these questions, all weighed on her soul in a way
her
powers and responsibility never could.

She had disposed of the evidence. No one would know, at least for now.
Should she hide it, what should she do, was she alone, who will she
tell?

Interesting dualities and an interesting puzzle to find the pieces for as
we follow the story.  I like it.


Glad you like it. When I erote the prologue I was on a roll... ; )

Hotaru took a look at Michiru, and could see that she was not going to
be
happy until she had an answer. "No {mama : Mama}," she lied.

Should have planned a fallback lie.

Oh, give the girl a break! ; p

Suddenly, Haruka's worried expression transformed into a conpiratorial
smirk. Hotaru's father figure leaned forward with a glint in her eye.
"So,
Hotaru-chan, who's the boy?"

Of course, the best lie is one they think up for you.

True dat! True dat!

Of course it also happens to be true...

Hotaru shook her head. "No, it's fine Haruka-papa! It's such a nice day!
I
think I'll walk."

I'm sure the thunder and lightning will stop soon.  The typhoon will drive
them away.  She really needs more practice if she's going to try to fake
them out.

She's a bad lier... If she could fake people out with easy it would not be
as funny!

Setsuna laughed, "Do whatever you like, but I'll play no part of it"

She's already asked to see the shoes, um, sandals.

She just asked what hotaru went shopping for. She did not actively try to
pry into hotaru's personal affairs...

The fact that the contents of that bag was extreamly personal in nature
(pregency tests) is just coincidential.

Hotaru snatched it from his hands and walked back to her desk ignoring
the
dirty looks she was getting from her classmates.

Hmm.  The glowing eyes may explain part of her social problems. :}b

Hey, the kid was a prick... I'm thinking of haveing him meet Hotaru's
"Overprotective Boyfriend..." ; )

*laughs maniacally*

 Good Cop, Bad {cop : Cop}. Right on the money. If the age difference
between them
wasn't less then five years Hotaru would swear that they were getting
predictable. Must be a parent thing. Oh, joy.

How soon they forget.

Haruka: *Sight* I remember my Teenage years...

Setsuna: You only turned 20 six weeks ago...

Haruka: Stuff it, you!

Hotaru knew that they would not be satisfied until she told them the
truth.
She also knew that she was a horrific liar. She was momentarily reminded
{on : of}
a friendly poker game she had with the {inners : Inners}. Who knew that
innocent
seeming Ami-chan was such a card shark.

Just simple odds.

and a calculateing mind... ^_^

In a small voice she said, "Ranma, I'm... I'm pregnant, Ranma."

Naturally.

Is it really that obvious? I did my best to keep the truth hidden in plain
sight (the one place no one ever looks...) ^_^

Ranma nodded, "How... how are you sure that you're..." He then thought
for a
moment. This was not the proper place for this conversation, and he was
getting more then his fair share of attention from passers by after
sending
a {Mailbox : mailbox} soaring into someone's front end.

She used a Sailor Moon pregnancy test kit, of course.  Probably told the
store clerk it was for her mother.

you know... I'm ggoing to use that... Not in this fict, but in it's sister
fict which is ctill under production...

In a weak, anxious voice Hotaru said, "Prove it. Make love to me."

"What?!"

Isn't that how this conversation got started?  Of course, it's too late
now.

Yeah. Either way you look at it, their 'screwed'! ; )

Haruka gave Hotaru a harsh glare, "Oh, shit? Is that all you have to say
for
yourself, young lady?"

Why do people say "young lady" when discussing unladylike behavior?

No idea... That is one of these mysterious questions that shall never be
answered... like why did the chicken croos the road, or what REALLY goes
into Micky D's "Hamburgers"...

Hotaru sighed. {I : In} a dreamy voice she said, "It was great. He does
this
wonderful thing with his tongue..." Hotaru eyes jetted open, and her
hand
went to her mouth. Did she really say that out loud? Blushing, she
looked
down, trying to hide her embarrassment.

Haruka screamed in exasperation. "Not that! I don't want the fucking
details! How did it come about?!"

Well, she did answer the question...

Just in far too much detail... ; )

With a big stupid grin he said, "Hello, Nodoka-chan!" He then {peed :
peered} in the
door and stopped in surprise. He did not expect to the boy in girl form,
and
the boy's rival waiting for him. He had a bad feeling about this.

I doubt Nodoka would think in manly for him to pee in the door.

Right... ^_^;

Setsuna leered forward, and smiled stupidly at Hotaru. "What's the name
of
the daddy?"

And where are those sandals?

I'll get back to you on that one... ^_^;

Ranma sighed, "I told my parents about what happened, you know, between
us,
and my idiot old man kicked me out of the house. I really don't want to
impose or nothin', but anyway, could I crash here for a while?"

At least that will make it easier for Haruka to find him.  She may not be
please though.  Setsuna will probably be annoyed at having a chaos factory
in the next room.

Not quite as badly as you think... I'm going to go into more details about
Butterfly "powers"...

There is a silver lineing to even the darkest cloud.

Haruka blinked. Had she just been played?

Like a fiddle.

Michiru: That's my job!

Her eyes narrowed as the pain in her head increased ten fold. She sat
down,
smiled insincerely, and in an acidic voice she said, "Good morning,
Saotome," while looking Ranma directly in the eyes.

Oops!  At least she used the family name.  It gives everyone a chance to
duck and cover.

Yep! ^_^

I hope the next chapter will be ready soon.  This meal conversation is
going to be priceless.

We shall see...

Don't quote me on this, but I doubt it will be more then a week.

Thanks for your time, and commentary.

- Sam


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