Very nice.  Prompts me to include someone... ^_^

The Lech

Pretty girls, pretty pretty girls
To feed my hentai power
I must grope pretty pretty girls
My every waking hour

Bras and panties, panties and bras
What a haul!  What a haul!
Uh oh, here come their owners!
I'll let my two idiots deal with them all

I am a lonely hentai
Lonely as can be
Why does Ranma have to beat me up
and take my fun from me?

Heh. Neat. He's not Chinese, though. :)

A thought: the third line of the last stanza is pretty long - perhaps
you could change 'does Ranma' to just an anonymous 'do they'? (Ranma
isn't the only one to beat him up, after all.) Anyway, minor point.

Thank you for responding.

Elin

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