Not pointless just obscure. I can see a couple of things,
one Nerima is worse than Hell, two Ryoga scares easy
.
I enjoyed the diagnoses of the inhabitants of the Tendo
Dojo. I don't agree with them mind but I did enjoy them.

That night,
  Nerima burnt to the ground.

And the Earth melted, the sun exploded, the galaxy went out
and the universe compacted into a small yellow ball, which
deflated. The end of where ever the story is taking place is
ALWAYS a valid ending. Usually
unsatisfactory but valid.
Apart from that it wasn't a bad attempt. I found the Demon
to be interesting in a perverse sort of way.

--
Rick Robinson
RICHARDROBINSON@prodigy.net


If violence is not solving your
problems you're just not using enough of it.

     Misato

"I guess I'm just an old-fashioned sentimentalist at heart.
I refuse
 to accept a no-win scenario.  I hate the thought of a
universe without
 justice.  If the maneuverings of dark powers can't be
exposed and
 defeated by the pure of heart, then there's no point in
anything.  I
 can't believe that."
                               -- Benjamin Hutchins




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