I was trying for the mad effect.
Nodoka in this is mad, insane, she is killing everyone who
comes to the door, thinking they are Ranma.
The Seppuku contract is actually almost incidental.
I could have done this with anyone. All you need is one
serial killer.

I am sorry you didn't like the story, perhaps I should have
included an explanation but I thought it would ruin the
effect.

Nodoka finishes writing.
When the doorbell rang and her son was at the door.

--
Rick Robinson
RICHARDROBINSON@prodigy.net


If violence is not solving your
problems you're just not using enough of it.

     Misato

"I guess I'm just an old-fashioned sentimentalist at heart.
I refuse
 to accept a no-win scenario.  I hate the thought of a
universe without
 justice.  If the maneuverings of dark powers can't be
exposed and
 defeated by the pure of heart, then there's no point in
anything.  I
 can't believe that."
                               -- Benjamin Hutchins



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