Aaron E Nowack wrote:
Why am I releasing a teaser for the next chapter of Shades of Gray?
Well, mainly because today was my self imposed deadline for completion of
a first draft, soeven though I'm presently only about halfway through, I
want to release _something_ related to Shades of Gray. (The revised
deadline, by the way, is the end of the month).
Ah.... Of course.
Anything I say can be ignored if you see fit. And for what it's
worth, I'm trying _really_ hard to finish up PoE by the end of this very
month. :)
It wasn't exactly a lie. Every word of it was true. It just...
left out a few things. The fact that those things were both vital and
potentially dangerous didn't change the truthfulness of the words she
had put down on paper.
Lies by omission. Shame....
Once she arrived there, she exchanged a few pleasentries with
the librarian as she returned her soon to be due books. She briefly
pondered checking out some more, but decided it would not be worth the
trouble of returning home to drop them off. She did however spend a few
moments browsing the new arrivals section, taking mental note of the
handful of books that seemed interesting.
soon to be -- soon-to-be (I'm not positive of this one, though. I
could easily be wrong.)
With that complete, Ami headed to her next destination. Not too
long later, she was knocking nervously at the door of the Tomoe house.
Even now, she felt a sense of malice around this house, as though the
evil that had once resided there had sunk into the very foundations.
She knew that was not the case, as repeated scans had proven, but even
she could not always counteract gut feeling with intellectual knowledge.
'too long later' sounds awkward to me. I don't know why, though, so
you can probably leave it as it stands.
Ami replied by taking out the Mercury Computer and pressing it
into Haruka's hands. "If I'm not back by tonight's meeting, run the
program that's highlighted on the screen. And..." Ami was silent for a
moment. "If I don't come back, give Michiru the computer. There's a
file on there that has all the basic commands. She should be able to
figure out the rest." Ami rose and turned to leave.
Ah, thought so.
Not long later, Ami was in a convenient alleyway. She
transformed, then Sailor Mercury headed for her next destination.
Not as much to comment on as I had hoped....
Hot, hot youma luvluv!
Two Dragons duel for the fate of a world!
Conspiracy, angst, betrayal, and more negative emotions then a Ranma
darkfic starring Ryouga!
OH YEAH!
And, as promised, every major character dies!
....
....
Okay, I'm interested. The final chapter of PoE is going to be
dedicated to you, too. :)
All this, and more in...
SHADES OF GRAY CHAPTER 10
THE CHAPTER THAT WON'T TAKE HALF A YEAR TO WRITE.
HONEST.
Looking forward to it!