On 5 Nov 01, at 11:11, Miller, Bert wrote:

I agree; another great episode, John!

Nitpicks:
1) The good guys need to get a break.  The amount of sh*t 
they're going
through is starting to detract from my enjoyment of the work.

Not sure I agree, though I was and AM anxious to see the
next plot twists with Ranma, especially Tourmaline's next move.

Just wait until you see what the Dark Kingdom is going to do with 
Ranma :)

2) Gos goes from falling-over-himself geek to
grand-master-of-the-witty-reparte a little too cleanly in 
this.  (Particuar scene in which I noticed this - him and
Makoto making out in the car.)

I interpreted that scene as Gos's former self coming to the
fore (the Silver Millenium Guardian Pluto), and enjoyed
it quite a bit.  We don't really know anything (yet) about
the old G-Pluto's romantic skills or lack thereof.

Good.  Note that he faints before the shift happens :)
 

3) Well, I was going to complain about the cliche-ness of 
Ryouga and Ami, but I decided to let that slide, especially
with what you've done to Setsuna. ^_^;

That's for sure!  Just when it looked like Setsuna had the
inside track for Ranma, she gets THIS happening to her
(chortle, chortle).

Heh.


John Walter Biles :  MA-History, ABD, Ph.D Candidate at U. Kansas
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