On Thu, Oct 18, 2001 at 06:39:56PM -0700, Finmagik wrote:

 
[So that's it... I hope you like this old fic I
reposted from Ff.net, I'll never be as good as
anyone.. I guess I should find a hole and crawl into
it. Whyd the hell didn't anyone comments on Darkness
part three??!]

Not bad, not bad at all. I've seen MUCH worse. There's some minor
technical details that need taking care of, though, and I still wonder
at the Akane/Hikaru pairing. Perhaps this needs to be made more
believable. I didn't comment on Darkness part 3 because darkfics
aren't my type.

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and all that seems most real about us is but the thinnest substance
of a dream,-till the heart be touched. That touch creates us,-then we begin
to be,-thereby we are beings of reality and inheritors of eternity.
-Nathaniel Hawthorne, American Notebooks, October 4, 1840

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