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Subject: [FFML] [fanfic][Ranma] Comes the Cold Dragon: Part VIb Rewrite
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       This last was greeted with a grim silence, as the
uniformed officers made a show of carefully re-drawing their
beads. The old man heaved a sigh of exasperation then looked

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around.

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       Onna-Ranma ducked the overhand right, knowing full
well that a hard left-hook had to be coming up from beneath.
It was, and he just barely managed to slip the punch, losing
plenty of skin between his larynx and chin. The trade-off was
worth the lost hide. He was inside Tarou's guard again and
could hammer away at the taller boy with the chestnut fist.
He worked on Tarou's solar plexus, then dropped down to a
point about two and one half centimeters above Tarou's pubic
arch, then back up to his solar plexus. Tarou tried to answer
this sudden agony by slamming the back of Onna-Ranma's head
with his elbows. It was a fairly effective stratagem.

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       (Now, Saotome!)

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        "He eats like his daddy, too!" Akane said in
disapproving tones, but she made sure Ranma could see her
smile while she said it. Tatsu-Ranma went to work on the side
of beef.  The girls had to work at not showing any
discomfiture, but they somehow managed.

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Mfg. Joerg
        McHunter@GMX.NET
        JJJaeger@neXgo.de

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