Subject: [FFML] [C&C][Ranma] newRanma - Chapter 14
From: "Michael A Chase" <mchase@ix.netcom.com>
Date: 10/12/2001, 2:19 PM
To: "FFML" <ffml@anifics.com>, "C. Jones" <guilty@furinkan.net>

Suggested changes: {before : after}
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From: "C. Jones" <guilty@furinkan.net>
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Sent: Thursday, October 11, 2001 20:30
Subject: [FFML] [Ranma] newRanma - Chapter 14

newRanma 14: {Beleiving : Believing}

This was a fairly severe problem in Ranma's {esitmation : estimation},
because Akane stayed locked in her room most of the day, up until
early afternoon, when she stormed out and announced that she was
going to cook dinner for the family.

Ranma didn't dare go to Nabiki for help, {becuase : because} that was
what got her in trouble with both Ukyou and Akane in the first
place. A quick call to the Nekohanten revealed that the shop was
closed. It had been more and more often since Shampoo {: had been}
reunited with
her mother.

Perhaps Kasumi was right. Maybe things like that were
inevitable whenever males and females came together. Still, she
didn't see anything wrong with what had gone on. Saya left the room
shortly after the two were interrupted. Ranma knew that she wasn't
much of a judge, but she didn't think the two had done anything more
intense than fondling {eachother : each other} a little bit.

Ranma wasn't sure she wanted to go. She had never seriously
considered *any* religion before, let alone Christianity. Still, if
anything was going to provide answers, it was in her best {intrest :
interest} to
look.

"Listen, Kodachi. If I could, I'd let you see him right now.
{Beleive : Believe} me, this is every bit as rough on me as it is on him."

It was too late. The sight of the man's {eclesiastical : ecclesiastical}
garb
seemed to ignite the gymnast. She was upon him before Ranma could
stop her. She screamed in anger and rage. Abandoning her ribbon, she
balled her fists and began to rain down blow after blow on the man's
unprotected face. He screamed in agony as Kodachi {pummled : pummeled}
him.

"You know that guy they hung on the cross?" the man in the
Hawaiian shirt asked. "He had the same idea. Christians {beleive :
believe} that
he is their savior because he tried to help everyone in the world.
He was tempted with every kind of evil known to man, and then he
sacrificed his life in order to {attone : atone} for everyone else who did
or
ever would commit one of those evils."

Hey kids. I'm playing pretty fast and loose with {Catholocism :
Catholicism} here.
The closest I get to it is the fact that my Mother-in-law is
Catholic. Most of what I know comes from conversations with her.
Corrections on the details are always welcome.

Just one thing.  Not all Catholic houses of worship are cathedrals, most are
churches.



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