Yep, Asuka's development is a bit to fast, but thats the only thing that
stands out.  I also recommend joining the Evangelion Fanfiction Mailing
list(EFML) for more feedback.


~KoalaKiller

***

Episode 16.

Weasel: So what are you going to do, Nene?
Nene: Mmmm, well your the Weasel, what would you suggest?
Weasel: I think your screwed

Episode 3.

Nene: At least she wanted me for my mind, not my body!
Linna: Yeah, I kind of thought it might've been like that.

~Bubblegum Crisis: Tokyo 2040


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