Hi there,
Just want to comment that the structure and overall plot of this crossover
series are both very good, despite the
obvious disparate backgrounds of Ranma 1/2 with Starcraft . (my mind was
going.. WTF when I saw the title a few months back)
:)
Good grammer and everything flows nicely. Glossing over the fact that
there's a big ALT sign on this, I like this. ;)
Kasumi awoke. Her first recognizable sensation was something
warm pushing her. Opening her eyes, she saw the horrid form of a
Zergling. It was nudging her, encouraging her to stand. She sat up.
Looking around, she could see the assembled Brood around her, silent
waiting for her orders. Above in the sky were the Overlords, bent to
her will. She smiled. It was her family. They were waiting for her.
How considerate of them.
Standing, she turned and saw Nabiki, Ranma, and the others. Her
brow furrowed. She knew them. Who were they? She blinked. Who am I?
she thought. I use to know. I can almost remember...
Nabiki and Ranma approached Kasumi. Nabiki's face was filled
with pain, and she leaned heavily on her husband. "K-Kasumi?" she
asked, her voice hoarse from her screams.
Kasumi's eyes widened. "Yes. Kasumi. I'm Kasumi. Your
sister." She smiled and embraced her younger sibling.
[Queen of the Zerg.]
Wooooo....... I like this part... :) :) :)
Kasumi, Queen of Zerg.. :)
End of Chapter 14
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Adam
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