Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fanfic] Mystery Fusion #20
From: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net>
Date: 8/21/2001, 12:51 PM
To: "Brian Randall" <brian@azurite.org>
CC: <ffml@anifics.com>

Bouncing around as I cut into the backlog:


    Mystery Fusion #20

    [Deus]

    Shielding his eyes from the harsh glare of the sun, the shorter of
two companions measured time against distance. "Almost there," he
commented.

    His companion grunted in a noncommittal manner,

A Legend of the Galactic Heroes/Birdy the Mighty fusion, obviously. You make
these things way too easy.



    [Machina]

Forgot 'aux' haven't you? :)


    She imagined she probably looked silly when she thought about it,
posing so dramatically in nothing but her underwear -- and the gun.

I dunno. Sounds like a good pose to me. :)

 >
    The wall behind her was lined with carefully maintained weaponry --
none of them loaded, of course. It was a hobby, though... and she did
have ammunition, hidden as that was.

bit awkward at the end. "hidden as it was' perhaps?


    [Deus]

    He glanced around the tavern warily. The majority of the men looked
like the rough type -- people he'd rather not mess with,

Date, perhaps, but not mess with.

if he could
help it. His taller companion was large himself, and somewhat rough...

But he liked rough sex. It was the one bit of kinkiness he allowed himself.


    "They call her..." he paused for a moment, licking his lips. He
really should have gotten a drink before beginning the search. "They
call her 'The Breeze'?"

Because of the breeze that flows through her head when the wind blows.

"Oh, you mean Usagi. She's upstairs,' One of the men said.



    She blinked, staring at her weapon. "Um... yeah, it was a gift..."

    The man drew closer, staring at it raptly. "The one with a cut down
.308 rifle round instead of the standard .44 clips?"

mag (Clip holds the gun in place.)


    ***

    [Deus]

    "Oh, my!" she said softly, as he stood near her nervously. "What's
this all about?"

    "Er..." he began nervously, gesturing to his larger companion, "this
is my partner, Otaki, and my name is Morisato Keiichi... I'm with the
Nekomi insurance society. Are you... Are you the one they call
'Belldandy the Breeze'?"

My mind seizes up at the images that invokes.

Cute piece.

D.B. Sommer



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