Okay, I've revised again from the comments I
received...toned down the fight and fixxed the
inconsistancies that I missed (thought I caught them
all, damn)...

the most recent version is at the following address

http://members.aol.com/roquenimorgul/ranneko.html

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"Caffeinated Kender?  What's that, a berserk spell?" - 
Tribble, Kender Warrior of the Celestial Kingdom
"God has to have a sense of humor, it's the only explanation for sex." - my father
"I have to write a how-to paper for class, so I'm writing a paper on how to be psuedo-evil." - my brother

http://members.aol.com/thrythlind/snake.html

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