Excellent fic.

LOUSY fanfiction.

RSS, while this was an excellent, if somewhat disturbing narative, it is
rather poor fanfiction in my mind.  The characters names could be replaced
with practically anything, and it would work perfectly.

Oh, given, there were token Sailor Moon references beyond the name, but they
would easily have worked if his name was something like Dave and hers
something like...I dunno, Tanya.

Your writing is VERY good...this just wasn't much of a fanfic.

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