Nice job.  Maybe now I'll be inspired to finish "Akane: Choose your own
Adventure".

Not too many 'good' endings to balance out the dark ones, though.
Though perhaps you have covered all the good endings which make
any sense for BGC (giving the ADP the jammers).

Part 27

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     High atop the most controversial corporate headquarters building 
in the world, Chairman Quincy of Genom placed the telephone handset 
back into its cradle.  He had thought that this late, or early, 
depending on one's point of view, she'd have been home to take his 
call, especially since there were no reports of her group having made 
any appearances in the past week.  But she hadn't answered, and he 
wasn't about to leave a message.  Maybe one day she'd find out about 
the opportunity she'd missed, but somehow he doubted she would.

There aren't any paths where Sylia actually takes the call to
be appointed chair of Genom.  I think it'd be nice to supply
one.

Part 36

     "Yes," Sylia said curtly.
     Priss was surprised.  "If it's so bad, why isn't Leon 
there?" she 
wondered.
     "That's not our business.  Linna, Priss, get clear and return to 
base," Sylia ordered.  "Nene and I will meet you there.  We'll do a 
quick charge on the suits and re-arm them, and then go back out."

 
And how about a path here where 'Leon' is actually a disguised
boomer, who succeeds in killing their client since they're off-
guard?  Then their business dries up since they failed a highly-
paid job.

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