Ghu's GUTS, Phil! Haven't you heard of a little

thing known as a paragraph break?



    It _looks_ like it might be a good story, but

with single paragraphs that go on and on and on, how

the heck can I read it? It hurts my eyes.



    Just a bit of unsolicited advice, Phil, and you

aren't required to listen to it, but I strongly suggest

that you count lines, and try - no matter HOW much it

irks you personally - to insert an indent and a blank

line/paragraph break every 30 to 40 lines, minimum.



    Paragraps that are 25 lines or less are usually

much less hard on the eyes, and far easier to read.



    As I said, just a suggestion, you don't have to

listen to it. But I highly recommend that you do.



    Ed Becerra



    "Dreamers may die, but the Dream is eternal..."