Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma][Short Fic] The Price Of Pride
From: Gary Kleppe
Date: 1/7/2001, 3:19 PM
To: Angela Jewell
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

Angela Jewell <ajewell@nmu.edu> wrote:

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THE PRICE OF PRIDE

By: Angela Jewell

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[snip]



With the bride's name not mentioned for so long, at first I expected

Ranma to be marrying Cologne because of the love pill he took in manga

v.6 story 2. :)



Not a bad short, but I think it could've done a better job of exploring

and describing Akane's feelings. About all we learn is that she's

unhappy about what's happening and regrets not having been more open to

Ranma, and even on these the story really only skims the surface.



Anyway, here's looking forward to more of "The Game" whenever you get

the chance to finish it.





Gary Kleppe

http://www.akane.org/gary/comics.html





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