Angela Jewell <ajewell@nmu.edu> wrote:
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THE PRICE OF PRIDE
By: Angela Jewell
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With the bride's name not mentioned for so long, at first I expected
Ranma to be marrying Cologne because of the love pill he took in manga
v.6 story 2. :)
Not a bad short, but I think it could've done a better job of exploring
and describing Akane's feelings. About all we learn is that she's
unhappy about what's happening and regrets not having been more open to
Ranma, and even on these the story really only skims the surface.
Anyway, here's looking forward to more of "The Game" whenever you get
the chance to finish it.
Gary Kleppe
http://www.akane.org/gary/comics.html