I've read through your fic, and I've decided not to make any comment as
yet. What I've done is gone over your fic and this is what I've noticed:
The dialogue in the first part was pretty much spot on, however, Leon
doesn't take his shirt off.
Leon and Claire have an arguement, about what I'm not certain, but
Claire runs off into the woods to continue her search for her brother. Leon
and Sherry are picked up the the military. Official word from Capcom.
Leon was made an offer by someone who claimed to be with the U.S.
Government. We're not sure as to what Leon's answer was. Sherry was
questioned about her parents.
In the novels written by Stephennie Danielle (S.D.) Perry, Leon and
Claire are picked up by Rebecca Chambers and two other S.T.A.R.S members,
Captain David Trapp and John Andrews. This version would seem to be
unofficial as Leon and Sherry are in military custady and Claire had run off
to look for Chris.
On the 1st of January 1999 I think it is Claire is caught breaking into
an Umbrella research facility in France and taken to a prison island. She
escapes and is able to contact Leon, who somehow manages to send Chris to
the island.
Hope all this helps. Later.
You have been talking to the Millennium Man, Y3K. I'm out like the
nineties. Peace.