The food angle at the end was perfect!  It is the only thing Ranma has in

common with Makoto at this point.



About chapter 3: ten years later, Ranma as a single father?  Was Kasumi's

talk to Akane about 'being a friend' foreshadowing the future of her

relationship to Ranma?



Nicely done, eagerly awaiting the next part.



-Anand





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