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The most obvious, Ranma has control over the neko-ken... sorta
The nekoken, instead of being the tramatic experience that destroyed his
trust in his father, is now a memory of his greatest triumph. Thus
instead of driving them apart and leaving him bitter, it became a
bonding experience, as noted by the lack of "Old Man, or Pops". In his
own mind, from that point forward, he was a 'Man Amongst Men', and
nothing, not even the curse will change that self image.
Well, while this is not exactly new territory to cover, seeing such a
relationship developed between Ranma and Genma should be interesting to
see.
Having mastered the Nekoken, and with it, his fear of cats things seem bright
on the horizon... But hey, whats this? Why is he chasing that ball of
yarn?
If you do decide to continue with this, please don't make it end up being
stupid. The prologue and first chapter should set the tone for the story
in general, and there wasn't anything at all of comedy here, so if you
plan to make the whole yarn thing as a joke, you make want to reconsider.
Just my thoughts, anyhow.
-TD