To prove that despite all rumors to the contrary that I am still alive:
Corwin wrote:
Grinning evilly, Ranma said to the guide, "Let's not tell Pop about
this, ok?
okay (spell it out. It looks bad and is lazy otherwise)
Nobody noticed the elephant become extremely nervous at that point.
But wouldn't an elephant be able to fight Ranma more effectively than a
panda would? (just look at Jasmine's success against Happosai ^_^)
"And who is this... mysterious fiancee?" Nabiki wondered. Since the rest
of her family was still out of it, nobody could take use that
need to reword that.
'We are?' Nuku Nuku thought, mirroring Nabiki's thoughts at the moment.
Thinking it over for a moment, Nuku Nuku latched onto Ranma's arm and
cried out cheerfully, "Nuku Nuku not mind!", silently adding to herself
that maybe they could sell the elephant to a zoo.
Heh.
"Your mother is coming?" Kasumi asked. "This is wonderful! I better go
and prepare something special for today's dinner, then!"
"We have to run, Boy!" Genma, who's
who had
"Um, before I could take you on that training journey, Nodoka made me
promise that I'd become a cybernetologist among cybernetologists, or you
and I will commit seppuku! You even signed it with a fingerprint!"
"Is cybernetologist even a word... Hey!"
Good question.
Ranma grabbed his father by the
front of his gi and shook him violently. "What's the big idea of
including me in that stupid contract!"
contract?!"
Nuku Nuku looked on in confusion. She couldn't understand what was the
problem, but at least she knew who caused it, whatever it was. The
cat-girl was about to join Ranma, who was animatedly beating his father,
when her ears picked up a weird sound, which appeared to be approaching.
'drawing closer' (sounds better to me)
After listening for a few moments, Ranma started saying, "Say, isn't
this a helic..." when he was cut off by the voice coming out of the
vehicle's speakers.
"Genma, release Ranma at once!"
Everyone in the living room of the Tendo Dojo looked at each other, then
outside, where a large combat helicopter was levitating
'hovering' (unless it's using one heck of an innovative anti-grav system
instead of standard helicopter blades)
"Who exactly is Nodoka, Uncle Saotome?" Nabiki voiced the question that
was on everyone's mind.
[You mean Nodoka Mishima?] the pink elephant's sign read.
Interesting choice of animal. Of course when people swear to have seen him
he can deny it and say he isn't there and that they must be drunk, since
everyone knows that's the only time you see pink elephants.
Well, if you liked it and would like to see more soon, you know what to
do. And if you think it sucks, that's ok too. ^_^
It could be amusing if it's played for nothing more than laughs and doesn't
try to be serious. Or even if you made it into a parody of other fics that
play along similar themes.
D.B. Sommer