Hello Deborah...
I wasn't going to write again, but Krista wrote a nice note, so I felt she
deserved a reply.
Yeah, that is Krista for You... [Btw. Krista, where is the next part of HOI?]
I think I understand where you all are coming from. I just wanted to try
something *really* different. I know I need to expect the criticisms you
discuss; I just wish that the other people who don't like it had taken the
tone you do here. I really appreciate the encouraging way you've expressed
your thoughts.
Yeah, that is who I know her... But all I can say is thet Your Work dosn't have
to hide befor HER work, which is IMHO very good.
I have Read it as far as You have send it to the FFML, and where my written
English better, I would have realy liked to be Your Pre-reader.
I missed in the revised version the conversation between Colonge and Shampoo
after the first (or was it the secound) visit from ranma to the Cat-cafe weher
they discuss who they LAW has to be aplicated. I think that would have made
theye behaviour more likely to understand for people who hadn't read the first 3
unrevised parts which where send earlyer to the FFML.
Sorry for my Bad English.
Mfg. Joerg ___
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