Well, I read it and I'm not sure what's going on. Although it's only a
prologue it sounds tad bit too fishy for me. I've read the last couple of
comments that people made about the idea, how new character fics are really
hard and you need to make it believeable because the group is just not going
to let someone in their group and I think you tried to do that here with the
connectiong between Ukyou and that guy, however one thing that is very wrong.
Ukyou spend the 10 years training and living as a guy. Most of the fics
have it believed that he even went to school as a guy. Now how does this kid
know that she is a girl? Ukyou had been hurt and swore and gave up her
womanhood and I don't think anything could have stopped her from that oath in
the past before she met Ranma. So, how does this guy know that she is a
girl?