Subject: [FFML] Re: re [fusion][R1/2/Avengers] Avenging Chapter 5
From: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net>
Date: 6/25/2000, 10:26 AM
To: "William Morse" <montanto@hotmail.com>
CC: <ffml@fanfic.com>

You wrote:



Also if you want to preread for this series, let me know, and I'll put you
on a list.

#sounds like a deal. Though I warn you I'm better at spotting the plot
holes
then doing grammer and spelling.

You're in then.



Upon Raiden's initial appearance, and learning who he was and that he was
angry, Thor had intended to apologize and explain that no insult had been
intended. But Raiden's arrogant boasts and slurs against her overrode that
impulse. How dare he call her conceited! Just because she was three times
the god of thunder Raiden could ever hope to be was no reason for him to
behave in such an offensive manner.

#Raiden no Baka nice to see Akane dominating Thor just as much as it's the
other way around.#

Yep. There are strict lines between the two, and then there are parts of
them that are blurry.


Well, that and her dalliances with Kitsune, whom Raiden fancied. But it
wasn't Thor's fault that her godly form was so irresistibleto the
self-proclaimed Goddess of Foxes.

#But obviously not proclaimed loudly enough to show up in any of the text
books. I know this is Marvel style mythology so it doesn't matter but
here's
a sugestion for an *actual* possibility. The female member of the two
foxes
who served Inari the rice god (I'm sure she's well over 1000 so that she
could easily do the nasty with Thor in human form) was Akumachi#

My lack of knowledge about Japanese mythology was showing.  I'll go with
what you said instead.


Thor recoiled at that memory. Not the specifics --thankfully those seemed
to
have been lost-- but there was one disturbing fact that was inescapable
Kitsune had most definitely been female. Very foxlike, but also
definitively
female.

#These scenes where Thor's memories don't add up are priceless. I can't
wait
for the horrifying scene when Akane actually decides to read up on Norse
mythology ^-^#

Akane: (puts down book) I'm supposed to be a GUY?!

Ranma: Heh. Now you know how I feel.



Raiden sneered. "What you are is an overbearing, arrogant self-centered,
egotistical, womanizing meddler that has challenged me for the last time."

#Of course the whole problem with this scene is probably that Raiden
doesn't
seem to realize there is something wrong with this picture as well#

Yep.


"Finished by you? Mayhap when icicles ornament Surtur's fiery realm."

#heh#

It seemed a Thorlike thing to say.



The instant the head of the shaft made contact with the pavement, it
exploded in fury, knocking the sorcerer off his feet and disrupting his
spell. Xellos was quick to recover as he shot to his feet, a look of naked
rage upon his features. "Who dares interfere with me?"

#From what little I know of Xellos in slayers it might work better for
Xellos to stop the arrow in mid air with hardly a glance. THe explosion
does
just as much damage but it's just enough to distract him. THen have him
acknowlege it almost as a left handed complement. something to the effect
of
"Ah, you distracted me. Impressive. Please, tell me your name before I
dispose of you."#

Yeah. Most people said that. I am leaving him a lot more in control now.


banishing the glowing portal. He moved in front of the troll, face
twitching. "Excuse me, but who in Hela's deathly realm are you and where's
Ulik?"
"Ulik was busy, so he asked me to fill in for him." The troll beat his
fist
proudly against his chest. "My name is Ulos, The Pretty Damn Powerful. I'm
Ulik's little brother."

#Don't you just hate non union labor?#

It's a case of nepotism more than non union stuff. :)



"You're a woman!" Raiden gasped as the staff's course was arrested
directly
above Thor's prone form.

#oops didnt see this bit never mind about one of the previous comments. #

It does take him a while to grasp the concept.



Let's see for some reason. I was'nt able to get the rest of the Document
on
this Email account

Wah!

so I'll just finish with commenting on what else I
remember. The bit with Sif is very good not just in the respect that it
reveals Xellos's true identity. You have a potential for a very
interesting
sub plot if Thor/Akane meets Sif or visits Asgard. Partially because it
makes for more of an expansion on how the ongoing headache of conflicting
memories. And also It is interesting how you'll handle this since
obviously
you can't use the "There never really was a Donald Blake" plot device that
Marvel fell back on.

Yeah. Expect another Asgardian to thumb her nose at Odin's edict and come
to Earth. The Enchantress is looking forward to finding out where Thor is
now and rekindling some old flames.


Of the other bit's I liked. The thaughts of the Slayers gang being
Asgardians is quite terrifying

Well, it's just Xellos who is, actually.

 and as always the Captain Japan and his cute
Panda sidekick scenes are fantastic.

Thanks.

 As well as Nabiki being true to form.
So anyway finish the next chapter of your Dirty Pair story stat so you can
get on with this. Looking forward to it and talk to you later.

After my vacation I'll get to work on it.

Thanks a lot for the C+C. It helped me out a lot.

D.B. Sommer





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